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One Last Letter

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One Last Letter by Aviators feat. Bronyfied

Lyrics:

Dear princess, I should have seen the signs
Chaos has risen again after all this time
Somehow I have to escape from
This nightmare of a world ours has become
What happened to the nation we all knew
We're crushed under Discord's rule
Where has harmony gone?
Feels like Equestria has been gone for so long

One last thing
That I've got to say
One more report
Before it's too late
I'm begging you to stop this chaos today
One last thing
That I gotta prove
One final goodbye
Before we meet our doom
Something happened to the peace that we all knew
This is my one last letter to you

I've tried to stop this on my own
But my friends have turned against me, I'm alone
So many, running and screaming
I'm crying out, can you hear me?
I refuse to believe that magic is dead
There has to be more than the conflict in my head
Dear princess, help me find a way
To defeat the chaos rising today


Isn't there something you can do
To save the world that we once knew
Dear princess, the lesson I learned today
Is that sometimes everything just fades away...


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just LOVE this song, may for the feature of Bronyfied
BRING IT METAL GUYS!!!
And inspired me that :)

Art by me =Aeritus91
Twilight/Discord/elements of harmony by Hasbro
Song& Lyric by Aviators and Bronyfied
Image size
1061x1500px 2.07 MB
© 2012 - 2024 Aeritus91
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Epona92's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

As with all my critiques I will start with the cons of the piece first, and then end with the pros, because I like to end on a good note.

The main thing that confuses me about this is those little floating things in the blackness. Not Discord's head, but the things that I finally realized were the Elements of Harmony. I had trouble telling what they were. Perhaps a little refinement could be added to those or some extra glow?

Now the pros (yeah, not many cons for this one). The atmosphere set by this is amazing. Discord is terrifying in the background. It's like he's lurking there, waiting to strike. And of course the way Twilight looks is heartbreaking. Now some people might take issue with how little there actually is on this piece, but in a way I feel that helps the piece. The overwhelming blackness exemplifies the utter emptiness and despair of the moment. The style was a nice choice too, but exactly why I like it so much I can't figure out. It just works.

Overall, the picture is a great compliment to the song. It captures the feelings to a tee, and for that I congratulate the artist behind it ^_^